up until the "human flesh", it was a really good little movie, with a likeable character and a interesting plot.. "Who's gonna meet in the desert, and how is he gonna find it".
And I like how it's a campfire story, to wrap it all up.
But then you had to try to be forcedfully funny, with the "lol, the ate him (or other people, who gives a shit), and "haha, he cant eat them", da dum tish!!
There's so much potential in this; dont ruin it. It could have ended right there, when he ended his story, with a tilt to the stary sky, or have him (the blue shirted guy) come back, all burn, with a cliffhanger ending.
Hope to see more from you.